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Smoke-Pit Memories 2.0
Tomorrow would you come,
a light for my smoky mind,
tin, grated walls that hold up my world,
a rough, concrete etched light jagged,
.tin, grated walls that hold up my world,
a rough, concrete etched light jagged,
Your love is a smoke-pit memory,
Texas-brown trees allow keyholes of light,
the fiberglass taste of menthol,
and a warm throaty rasp.
Texas-brown trees allow keyholes of light,
the fiberglass taste of menthol,
and a warm throaty rasp.
Tomorrow you have come,
a switch i've finally found,
your little portable player,
and childhood favorites abound
your little portable player,
and childhood favorites abound
Your Love is a smoke-pit memory,
and all I have left to say,
menthol may be your flavor,
but black and mild was always mine anyway.
Tomorrow you have passed,
and here's what I have found,
You are my heart's nicotine,
so sweet, leaving me to drown,
A solitary iron-grate bench,
ash a balancing act on each curve,
A single cigarette sits resting on the edge,
trails of smoke lifting, floating, dispersing
into the past of a heart once broken.
Thankful for all these memories,
a smoke-pit memory bound.
(This is a little rough yet, but I'd like to eventually integrate the two into one solid piece)
A solitary iron-grate bench,
ash a balancing act on each curve,
A single cigarette sits resting on the edge,
trails of smoke lifting, floating, dispersing
into the past of a heart once broken.
Thankful for all these memories,
a smoke-pit memory bound.
(This is a little rough yet, but I'd like to eventually integrate the two into one solid piece)

Did you write this???!!! This is deep, Sammey! Great job.
ReplyDeleteUhmmm Yeah. =) Its all kinda sorta mine...
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